Friday, June 19, 2009

Drowning In The Past Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking though the hallway of my mind
Looking at everything I’ve left behind
All The ghosts that refused to die
And the lingering question of Why?
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Olivia Braun
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Last hakkaobake 15 August 2009

So well worded I can feel the passion in evey line. 'Drowning in an ocean of my life I still try to look at the bright side Nothing I can do Nothing I can say Will ever make theses memories fade away But I have a lifetime left ahead of me And I'm not ganna let this hold me back I have so much time to make new memories that outshine All the Nightmares of my Past…' I've always wanted to make a poem like this and now that I've found this I wont have to. It said everything I felt after the girl I loved broke me down the pushed me away. Someday you will be loved.

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