Slipping away,
Drowning in tears of sorrow,
Laughing all day,
Until the end of tomorrows.
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our sweetest poems are those which tell us of our saddest thoughts; i guess.........
A very nice piece of work from your own experiences. Yes, one day, all will be well. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A brave girl crying alone but laughing with friends! When she died she took away what her mother had taken from her. Is it 'affection'? A calm, pathetic atmosphere the lines(words) make! A touching poem this is!
seems to be coming from the inner soul...really a great expression of words...
Poignant tale................well put forth...............