Sunday, August 5, 2007

Drowning In Sorrows Comments

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Drowning in sorrows once again can’t reach the shore
Keeping my head above water has become such a chore
Sadness has started slipping in, weighing me down
A dim light at the top, I have to fight it, can’t let me drown
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Donna Nimmo
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Edna Javelosa 05 August 2007

a fight for survival...beautifully penned..

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Yu Ren 05 August 2007

a meaningful poem, as you said, maybe tomorrow, a happiness that can last, yes, i'm sure this, best wishes. tx

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