Friday, May 12, 2006

Drowning In Love Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Falling through water
Swimming for breath
Being sucked down farther
As she drowns to her death
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Staring swimming
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trisha evensen 12 May 2006

lovely poem, but I have to get the tissues

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Sandra Fowler 12 May 2006

Very touching poem. There is something very fragile about the mood of this one. The heart plays a sad tune that only the sensitive soul can hear. Warm regards, Sandra

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Chuck Audette 12 May 2006

Drowning in love - great closing line. The rhymes and meter are pretty rough in places, but a little polishing and this could be a nice gem. -chuck

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