Drowning In Love Comments
Falling through water
Swimming for breath
Being sucked down farther
As she drowns to her death
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Very touching poem. There is something very fragile about the mood of this one. The heart plays a sad tune that only the sensitive soul can hear. Warm regards, Sandra
Drowning in love - great closing line. The rhymes and meter are pretty rough in places, but a little polishing and this could be a nice gem. -chuck
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7/25/2025 11:58:37 PM # 1.0.0
lovely poem, but I have to get the tissues