Drowning Breathlessly Comments

I can relate to this poem not bad

Clever write, enjoyed reading it.

Emptiness of space everything amounts Power obediently deceiving Solemnness misunderstands But perfection is the only confession what a saying! perfection is the only confession. no body is perfect but we should try for more perfection, striving towards perfection should be our, every ones motto..a very nice poem, i like it.

The poet grows and matures in her own êrsonal search for wisdom and compliance in this world of separations, egoism and and wants. There is nevetheless an aspiration for something breath - able and true.... Love a lot the way the words are selected and used...excellent metaphors....Keep-it and keep writing! +++++

Nice Use of words. Deep meaning. Hidden thought. nice work.

rich in meaning inside tempting to read again and again..........a good write.9