Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Drowning Comments

Rating: 5.0

My smile has been declined
The laughter in my world silenced
I feel stone weights around my ankles
And tomorrow seems like a year away
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Kristina Louisa Carr
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Ryan Wegenast 04 May 2011

You have painted a beautiful picture with this piece and the sentiment is clear, great work! This was a pleasure to read.

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Kristina Louisa Carr

Kristina Louisa Carr

Born: Cape Town, South Africa
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