Monday, February 15, 2010

Drowning Comments

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I knew about drowning
Long before love taught me:
Eyes, nose, mouth filled with water,
Holding my breath
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Sina Farajzadeh 17 November 2012

Great work. Nice similes. Liked it. Best wishes

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Sally Plumb Plumb 15 November 2012

Some of us dive in head first.

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