Drowning Comments

amazing, u were right, one of ur best. deep and powerful, im sorry

I LOVE this poem and I LOVE the song Hero by Superchick. Amazing poem. Amazing song. Amazing job =)

Chills. Best poem I've read on this site.10/10. And I don't give those.

that one was good too.i'm no poem expert or anything (haha read my poem it royally sucks) but it seemed like it changed i liked the last half best.it got deep i think a sad story expexcially since i used to know a girl that cut.

I liked tis one but I too thought the poem somhow changed in essence and got better when you moved from the first person to the third person maybe you could experiment more with that.

Ah such a sad story....nicely written....the opening is not as strong as i might have like liked and compared to the latter part....but i like ur poem.... Not ur best tho.... Good one....liked it....\m/

Ah such a sad story....nicely written....the opening is not as strong as i might have like liked and compared to the latter part....but i like ur poem.... Not ur best tho.... Good one....liked it....\m/