Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Drowning Comments

Rating: 4.5

trapped beneath the surface
the icy cold fills my lungs
I watch the suns rays
bounce off the waves surface
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Bryan Alexander
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Margo Posh 26 November 2009

This is of course, the ultimate senario, the finest hour, the moment of reckoning... not for one, but for us all..... lovely x

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Sonya Florentino 24 September 2009

love this drowning poem....never thought dying could sound so beautiful! !

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Bryan Alexander

Wickliffe, Ohio
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