Thursday, December 11, 2008

Drowning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drowning in the deep depths of darkness
crawling to the bottom of the sea
Feeding off the scum of the earth
What's happening to me?
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Delicate Heart 01 May 2009

nice piece written eloquently.....rated ten for the theme contained within...........

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TR0UBL3 IM B@Q 18 December 2008

wow brittany i can see your sorrows n your poems are getting better nice ma

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Sebastine Humaemo 16 December 2008

wow.....brittany...your poems going to hit a landmark for soon.....beautiful lines....can feel the depth of sorrows...thanks for sharing....

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