Drowning Comments

My name is Lupita I really like your poem because dats how my little cousin downed but my cousin was a little boy not a girl but anyways i really liked your poem

Norma has Sir William been makin u read my rites...i thouhght only I was panic manic Excellent rite....G

Norma, this is a very dark, sad poem about death with no one to help, so may I suggest that you read one that I wrote along the same line, ANOTHER LIFE. Keep writing, you are doing well! Scarlett