Sunday, June 4, 2006

Drowning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I am imaging if you were mine
There's so many sweet things I'd do to you
To prove how much I love you
There is no one like you
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ice johnson
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***** ********* 04 June 2006

This one made me cry you bad man. I can relate to the feeling within this beautiful forlorn love poem very acutely. What I try and cling to, is the moments of joy. What you describe as a vacant disinterest, but with a hidden sweet feeling, in your poem, those sorts of moments are the one that make me smile and carry on. You got to have faith that things will change to merg day dream life into your physical life, in tiny steps of course. I also rely on destiny knowing exactly where it is taking me! It should do, it's been doing for long enough! lol A very tear jerking, thought provoking poem, thanks for sharing it. Now I really need Ice! wrist burnout....ouch Tai, time for bedfordshire.

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