Friday, April 12, 2013

Drowning** Comments

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Out there, March fields wear daffodils;
Each trembling mouth mimicking
Your nervous, shallow breathing.
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Neil Young
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Susan Lacovara 14 November 2013

I, too, have witness my own mother, daydreamingly dosed...and drifting from child's clutching, yet comforting hand. Your write is powerful and poignant. I will continue to explore your poems, anticipating stirred emotions. Well done. I must admit, when I saw your name, I was intrigued, as Neil Young is one of my favorite songwriters. PEACE

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