Tuesday, July 11, 2017

Drowned Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a man drowned in a river,
every ripple a reflection,
a delicate facet of you, weightless,
gossamer beauty, yet the composite whole
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Seamus O' Brian
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Rebecca Navarre 05 August 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! What A Ever, Beautifully Deep Poem To Read! ! ! ! ! Ever So Heartfelt! ! ! ! ! The Way Such Love Pours Out! ! ! ! ! Ever So Beautifully Done! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Tom Billsborough 13 July 2017

A beautiful lyrical poem of love and its all consuming power. It flows as the streams of love flow around you. It's going into my favourites' list, Seamus.

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Tom Allport 11 July 2017

a wonderful poem of feelings felt when the love from another feels like heaven sent? ..............beautifully written Seamus.

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Seamus O Brian 11 July 2017

Thank you, Tom! Be blessed, my friend.

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Seamus O' Brian

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