Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Drown Comments

Rating: 5.0

I live my life through verse,
It's sad, but I could do worse,
If I'd lived my life through you
It would be gone well and true,
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Sasha Julia
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Ted M 05 August 2009

Emotional write in excellent rhyme.10+++

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Siddharth Singh 05 August 2009

Good to see you gathering yourself back from the heartbreak, by the end of the poem. Nice work.

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Chanelle Williams 05 August 2009

ilove 'rhyming poems' thats totally my thing. Yours is very cool, i might say i totally spend hours writing new poems every day lol well not hours, just like here and there from time to time haha slapp bakk Chanelle Williams Ps; sorry about my randomness

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