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MANY RE-ACTIONS ARE DONE OUT OF REVENGE... IT’S EASY TO SAY FORGIVE BUT TO LIVE IT IS A FAR GREATER TEST …. THE READER IS CAPTIVATED AND FEELS THE WRITER’S PAIN AND ANGER … NICELY DONE.

AMY AND WELLS have said it all! ! ! ! great poem! !

I like this poem the world needs people like you to be on the justice system. Bring back death row sodd that. Serve our own justice.

Any woman would kill to have a man like you... great poem, very passionate!

Now that's intense! I can feel the rage.

i like it, if i were in the position of a man mourning for his violated wife i would kill the man responsible. this poem shows the intensity and the need for revenge. it's brilliant

hey joshua... a nice poem... and i agree with MS...you've got real dark and violent ideas 'brewing' in your head! ! ... Asma...

you got funny little fantasies brewing in your head, buddy. But you make them flow nicely so even thought the subject may be rum the poem is very readable. Cheers, MS

you've written it in such an amazing way that the reader can actually visualise what it is you are writing about. not many poems have this effect on me. very well written.