Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Drown Comments

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Life, life it brings you down
It has one goal; for you to drown
It won’t stop dragging until you’re in
Then all of a sudden the lights will dim
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Destiny Avaritia
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Aury Cecile 27 May 2008

Nice job with the rhyming. I love how your poems are kiddish with such tender topics. It's as though your singing an emo song in a childish, singsong way =]. Very nice style. I'm looking forward to reading more of it. If you could please read over some of my poems. I would appericiate to hear what you think of them. Thanks.

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