Sunday, February 15, 2015

Drought! Comments

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Arms is active in each side
Fought for the myths of single past
To fix the belief with an extreme sigh
To nullify other with grin of arms
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SALINI NAIR
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Sd Tiwari 23 July 2017

'losses sparkle in the faded eyes' this is fate of the draught. Very nice penning.

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Rajesh Thankappan 01 March 2015

The world is in disarray today and you have painted a good picture of this gloominess. Loved it.

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Kee Thampi 21 February 2015

Rise of blood and sea is in tune Sadness whisper in the depths of loss a magic of words Turtle withdrew in to the lonely shell Vagueness widen hands to the future how bold in this magical poem and spears it into my soul

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 February 2015

Groovy description.Deep feeling.Many thanks.

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Khalid Saifullah 15 February 2015

A thoughtful poem..........................................

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Akhtar Jawad 15 February 2015

The most ugly act on the part of humans is to fight for religion as the purpose of religion is to live and let others live.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 February 2015

Very insightful and bears relevance to today's strife-infested world......Salini......amazing piece composed extraordinarily........10

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Valsa George 15 February 2015

There is an internal and external drought in the world than never before! The world is heated up with rivalries and intolerance as the earth gets parched due to global warming! The rain of love and peace alone can restore life's fertility! A symbolic write!

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