Drops Of Shame Comments

A very different write from what I've read of you so far, both in flavour and the style. A bit cynical but nevertheless an honest commentary on our times when truth lies shackled in iron chains and the sun is made of a cloud of lies...

Nice poem with marvelous ending.

a great poem but sadly a true comment on indian secularism and social justice mark drama. dr yogesh sharma.

Interesting poem, so much imagery I felt drowned in it. Worth a second read. HG: -) xx

Your very right in many points and truths BUT, there is the other side of the coin to. We don't see it when looking at one side.It remains hidden.

Bitter realities but very true......10/10.

Poetry of the reality of today's made up life. CP

How do you know so much about the U.s. Congress...LOL! ...Jocund, aside, , , 'tis true, how much truth is bound in chain...how true, so many who have impact over our lives speak from both sides of their mouths....Excellent topic...and you front it & deliver it with factual specifics & astute eloquence. F j R 2009

truthful write of human hypocrisy...expressed it well..great write...10

quiet strong message Reshma. allthe values that stood one in good stead, no longer get you any where. shameful indeed. life has become a sham... 10 mamta

You speak of the human condition. Sad but true. stirring verse. Thanks for sharing

yeah majority of people are hypocrites. The word personality come from greek word persona means mask. Everyone lives with mask. And those who sheds mask are poisoned or gunned down....... Wonderful Write

Wow! You offer the reader such a cynical view of the world - but penned with skill and a great feeling for language. You take hypocrisy (which you obviously abhor) and you give it a severe shaking in this strongly worked poem that is written from lots of bitter experience, I suspect. Some excellent metaphors stand out in this well written poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A different work from a romantic poet Your canvas seems to have widened Another beautiful creation from a promising poet

This poem gets to the roots of all ills the soceity is suffering from. A compact composition with elegant flow of thoughts. A 10