Drops Of Hardship Comments

i especially enjoyed the first 8 lines. the rest was less so (not enjoyed so much) . i would put a d at the end of pronounce. i'll send more input in a message. it is bad enough when two words which are spelled differently but sound the same have different definitions. it is even worse, in my opinion, when two words are pronounced the same, have different meanings, but are spelled the same. like general (the noun) and general (the adjective) . thanks for sharing. bri :)

Ellias, you always have nice pen to write something for you.. this always known well as signature of your style..nice Ellie_Soul

Really, I've never ever thought of words sea and see in this way..........Captain, you deep observational skills are remarkable! ........lovely write

oh! interesting! this one a bit different with ur other works i think....and the last line was nice...i haven't thought in this way abt see and sea before!

dipende da come si sta andando a faccia con la vita...... vuoi essere un grande uomo, dovete provare duro. godetevi la vostra poesia.