Drops Of Freshness Poem by Rini Shibu

Drops Of Freshness

Rating: 5.0


When the bubbles burst
sprinkling tiny droplets
The drops roll and ooze
from one leaf to another
Some freeze in the morning chill
dispersing the cool freshness
And the energy of love is
absorbed through the pores
making the inner being alive
Heart grows more and more
towards the origin of light
Then at it's completeness
a bud protrudes and blooms
quenching the thirst of the bee
A kind of unusual feel
is streaming into my heart
Filling it with abundance
of joy and pleasure
I want to be alive once more
when the morning dew is at my door

Monday, April 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: joy,love,nature love,pleasure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 19 April 2018

Rini, this nature poem is as fresh as the dew. Wonderful.+++10

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Rini Shibu 19 April 2018

Thanks for your lovely comment Robert..! ! !

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Akhtar Jawad 11 April 2018

Life is a joy, but sometimes we forget how to enjoy, it's very easy just remain close to the nature. A lovely poem.

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Rini Shibu 12 April 2018

Thanks Akhtarji for your wonderful comment

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Muzahidul Reza 11 April 2018

When love is joy is and in nature these two are always, nice poem

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Rini Shibu 11 April 2018

Thanks Texan for your lovely comment

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Richard Wlodarski 11 April 2018

A most beautiful ode to nature and feeling alive. Excellent write, Rini!

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Rini Shibu 11 April 2018

Thank you so much Richard..! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2018

A marvelous poem that gives joy and pleasure to one's heart. Beautifully crafted and well executed.

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Rini Shibu 11 April 2018

Thanks Rose Marie..! !

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