Drops Of Crimson On The Pillowcase Comments

There's certainly consistency in this - in terms of the disturbing use of red as blood - though the lurid effect is modified effectively by the intimations that it's a nightmare. My guess is that you've written this stuff out now! A powerful piece of work regardless! jim

Another good one for sure, a rather grim picture painted here as well, excellent imagry, well penned etc. would love to see something happy and sweet from you as well. Coming from the dark estending towards the light for a change. What do you say, I'm sure it would be wonderful. Anway a big (10) from me on this one--Melvina

do we have another EDGAR ALLAN POE HERE you do write some cruel poems, very nasty, and straight forward, you waste no punches. with your words.

Breath-taking imagery. Very impressive Eliza...