Eyes that search among the clouds
In a few seconds they melt and fall
Wetness when felt on the ground
Then realize they are drowned
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Hope sweeps the desperation away.. You are so positive at your seeking mind, your poem is soaked with the clouds of passion. Thanks for sharing this with us. 10++
“Still in hope they look for the sky”.. It is this hope that leads us in our life. A poem of positivity..
The images are compelling forcing us to empathise. Truly poetic and mysterious. Thank you. I also thank you for your lovey comments on A Million Sorrows.
A wonderful little poem Rini....loved it