Wednesday, October 12, 2005

Drops Comments

Rating: 4.5

A raindropp off the Matterhorn
was in the heavy clouds just born.
It fell and tumbled from great heights
enjoyed, while falling, splendid sights.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 13 October 2005

Such a nice story Herbert. I liked it very much. Sincerely, Mary

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Raynette Eitel 12 October 2005

Tears...rain...a silly filly and the Matterhorn. What more could you add? Fun poem. Raynette

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Uriah Hamilton 12 October 2005

I'm not for sure the reason for the tear, but a ponytail in a poem always works for me.

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