Friday, October 18, 2013

Droplets Of Your Memories Comments

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When I finally managed to bury every single memory of yours,
someone came to dig it deep down from the grave.
The pain just keeps on floating when I tried to sink it.
I deserve happiness.
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Mitran Zv 18 October 2013

Thank you, Khairul.

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Khairul Ahsan 18 October 2013

'someone came to dig it deep down from the grave.' This someone who could be? If you want this to remain a mystery, let it be! ' But I realize I'm not open to anyone, when the fear keeps on haunting me. I abandon myself without my own knowledge.' These are very beautiful expression of your inner feelings that touch the readers' mind. Over all, a good poem!

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