Droplet Comments
Our galaxy dies,
A splash of water,
Sparkling in the sunlight on a tarmac sky,
Gently exploding with glittering streamers,
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This is because of our negative works on earth. Nice work.
very beautiful. Im assuming your actually talking about a break-up or love lost...i like how you equated it to the explosion a galaxy. really nice write man
This really moved me, You show a beautiful gift that I hope is not so rare, that others cannot access it, , , , WELL DONE , , EXCELLENT Love duncan X
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7/24/2025 8:50:09 PM # 1.0.0
Thanks folks. I literally watched water droplets fall...and my imagination took it from there.....