Sunday, December 14, 2008

Droplet Of Memory Comments

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When the rain fell
a memory flashed so well
before my eyes I saw
a curvy line bowed
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 December 2008

I can feel the atmosphere too.Well done Kite!

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Min Sia 14 December 2008

Reminisce..a way of the person's mind..to endure the pain that was once been inside... Yet..is feels great..like a rainbow after storm... Very fine imagery..poetic..exquisite... Great write..truly a piece of art!

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<font color =fusha>Amy 14 December 2008

the simplest things can create and recreate great memories thanks for sharing 10!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 December 2008

Memory of rain fell on me Ifeeling my heart with glee. Goooooooooooooood work........

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Fiona Davidson 14 December 2008

Nice and descriptive...enjoyed reading it...thank you

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