If only I am a little drop of rain
I would skip and jump in every window pane
I will come tumbling down in every leaf I see
I will shimmer and glitter so you'll see me quickly
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Every stanza of this poem vreates a beautiful imagery. Loved your exuberant muses on the raindrops.
Naida absolutely beautiful. Juxtaposition is a very fine way of expressing one's feelings (in this case you are the rain drop) . I honestly loved each verse...really very creative :) Hey! dropp should be spelt drop. It still gets a 10/10 from me :)
wow.... i can feel the rain...wonderful imagery... I can picture out every stanza of yours..really nice... i can imagine the dew..wow...really refreshing.. i don't know..basta very nice....
This poem emanates positive energy in a dynamic raindropp movement. Beautiful details of rain drop, the joy of seeing a rain dropp making reader understand the joy of life stays in everything, even in a small dropp of rain. Beautifully written.. Cristina Teodor
What a very evident lovely spirit you are.... This reflects a lot about you and is so beautiful to read.. Looking forward to every line as I read.... Very nice A worthy piece of art.............. Jim Troy
like your sense of joy in this one... it emanates life... keep writing!
I have deleted this poem and re-enter it because of the word dropp which was spelled incorrectly. when I wrote it again and checked, It is still spelled incorrectly which I am sure I proofread it well. hmmmm...i don't know
Every stanza of this poem creates a beautiful imagery. Loved your exuberant muses on the raindrops.