Monday, December 14, 2015

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I'm scared of the so called Valleys of Tears.
Aren't there in the valley's mires, swamps?
I would not like my tears there tolerant ground to find
roots to throw and stay active,
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Akhtar Jawad 25 December 2015

Yes, tears are pearls of love and emotions and shouldn't be scattered everywhere. A touching poem.

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Dimitrios Galanis 26 December 2015

Sometimes we do not pay attention to the happiness we enjoy, we neglect it till the day we find out that it has been gone.Unfortunatelly tears can not bring it back.But have to be shed.The next time may they be not shed.Thanks a lot.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2015

Let us face life till the end. Nice work.

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Dimitrios Galanis 22 December 2015

Mostly meant are the duties neglected towards loved ones.that is why the remorses are so painful to cause tears shed.

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Mihaela Pirjol 15 December 2015

A heart-warming poem, poetically written; where indeed, the imagery is used at its best, efficiently, for creating an outstanding write.

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Dimitrios Galanis 15 December 2015

Αγαπητή Μιχαέλα, πάρα πολύ ωραίο ως σύνολο δεν είναι.΄Εχει όμως αυτό που θέλει ένα ποίημα, την εικονογραφία.Με εικόνες λέει αυτό που θα έλεγε μια πεζή πραγματιστική ανάλυση.

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