Thursday, January 13, 2005

Driving Comments

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the painfilled notes of my song ring out
dripping ironically
broken in mangled gasps
sobbing as the car tears farther and farther away
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Kim McInnis
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Kim McInnis 13 March 2005

I scribbled this down in the car on my way to Toroto over summer vacation. It's narrative; a really sentimental song came on the radio and started to break up as I drove away from the signal. Getting away from the troubles and torment of regular life in my regular place. Or, in essence, taking a vacation.

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Matthew Hyatt 12 March 2005

Once again Kim you have totally curve balled me. I am having trouble deciphering this one. send me a message on how this one plays out.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 13 January 2005

I wrote a comment in your comment section. H

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Kim McInnis

Kim McInnis

LaSalle Ontario
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