Friday, July 3, 2009

Driving Toward Affection Comments

Rating: 5.0

The summer heat
Has me panting like a prowling cat
In the staccato rhythm
Of frantic desire.
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Uriah Hamilton
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fleur de lys 25 August 2009

Phwoah Uriah! I couldn't help smiling at the humour of the first 2 verses. This is altogether different from your usual gentle, plaintive tone. Solid write, I admire the way these pieces seem to pour from your pen so effortlessly.

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