Thursday, April 12, 2012

Driving Through The Dark Comments

Rating: 5.0

Travelling for miles, and miles,
Through the dark;
In the distance a flood light appears, upon a hill,
Pulling the old house and barn back together;
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Kevin Patrick 11 May 2012

I like going for drives to, there's nothing more wounderful. then loading the car up and going out, the freedom of the open road, is somehting I wish can go on forever.

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Danny Draper 26 April 2012

Indeed, what is the journey without illumination or enlightenment, a nice write gentle and descriptive.

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Juan Olivarez 25 April 2012

For some life is a long drive in the dark, for others it is long walk with cactus on either side. Either way great poem buddy.

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Dave Walker 23 April 2012

A really wonderful poem.

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Joseph Anderson 16 April 2012

Smoky I am back.A gripping portrayal of a drive in the dark. It gives one time to think. A great rememberance for us all A10

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Valerie Dohren 13 April 2012

Wonderful Smoky, Love the last verse, very insightful.

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Eric Cockrell 13 April 2012

this is a great poem... feel like i'm riding with you!

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