Wednesday, March 29, 2006

Driving Along Comments

Rating: 5.0

When driving along,
Things pass by,
Right and left,
I only seem to sigh.
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Aisha Sherazi
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Brian Dorn 09 November 2006

Great write, Aisha... and a valuable message. Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 14 May 2006

10,10,10,10, Applaud! Applaud! this is full of wisdom words that crack through doubt, Love Duncan XXX

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Elya Thorn 23 April 2006

The road of life...you've expressed it so well with this poem! It's one of those perfect poems from all points of view, it really makes you think! But it might be also a poem about the road of a heart, of love! I love the way it is accelerated ot first, and then it stops, looking around, and behind, 'Even at the ground'. ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Aisha Sherazi

Aisha Sherazi

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