When driving along,
Things pass by,
Right and left,
I only seem to sigh.
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10,10,10,10, Applaud! Applaud! this is full of wisdom words that crack through doubt, Love Duncan XXX
The road of life...you've expressed it so well with this poem! It's one of those perfect poems from all points of view, it really makes you think! But it might be also a poem about the road of a heart, of love! I love the way it is accelerated ot first, and then it stops, looking around, and behind, 'Even at the ground'. ~~Elya Thorn~~
Great write, Aisha... and a valuable message. Brian