Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Driven Into Despair Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today there will be no killing or blood spilling well none coming from you
I'll kill your friends, parents, and siblings to
I will frame you so your locked up for life
I'll pay the judge so your locked up all alone
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Kevin Fisher
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i think i know who this is about, if im right then i best run for cover :)

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Anjali Sinha 23 May 2009

hey Kevin sooooooooo sad I can feel your despair so nicely brought out in your poem a tenner from me anjaliiiiiiiii

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Dakotas Angel 14 May 2009

Good expressing i really liked it :)

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brittany 14 May 2009

very very nice expressing how you feel... sometimes i feel that way too.. good write..

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DaNa XxX 13 May 2009

oh thatsreally make me wanna cry ~tears~.....i really can feel the emotion in this poem...keep written! !

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princess sweetdreams 13 May 2009

Kevin sweety if you feel this way the i am sorry and i want you to know that i am always here for you! ! ! but this poem is very say! ! ! ! ! ♥ Chelce~Lee♥

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Stacey Rimmer 12 May 2009

awww it makes me want to *cry* ((in a good way)) good poem

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Christina Phan 12 May 2009

kooolll poem 10+ its scared to me n i feel like someone chasing me great one

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*I'm not broken. * 12 May 2009

wow, kevin. amazing poem. I can feel the emotion pouring through the lines. sad, but amazing all the while. +10

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Lady Black Rose 12 May 2009

THIS POEM CRYS PASSION... AND THAT IS WHAT IT IS...PASSION.. +10 EVIL BUNBUN

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your work doesn't earn a 10, it takes it. honestly expressed feelings in this poem... just mind blowing... +10 as always kevin. thanks for sharing. I have no answer for you, I am left asking that also.

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awwww..... but it was a nice poem.. i understand the meaning of despair now from your point of view of course... but it was a good poem

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Kevin Fisher

Kevin Fisher

Canton, Ohio
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