Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Drive Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take the wheel!
We could drive til the gas tank is bone dry.

Because I don't want to die in this town,
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Eden Sheffroth 12 April 2006

PATTIE I LOVE YOU! ! ! lol now that we got that outta the way I must say this poem is interesting...anytime ya wanna go on a ride just give me a call lol I'm always up fer an adventure! ! Excellent poem buddy keep er up! ! !

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Nick Percowycz 12 April 2006

I live in such a town! Great endidng to this poem! Obey the speed limit. This poem merits a ten

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Poetry Hound 11 April 2006

A nice feel to this piece. I like the 'Take the wheel' exhortations. That feels very original. Regards.

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