Saturday, December 3, 2005

Dripping Crimson Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wrote you a letter
and I wanted it to be
in your hands today
but you left swiftly
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Uriah Hamilton 05 December 2005

Just like Mary I enjoyed the visual.

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Mary Nagy 03 December 2005

Wow, this is such an unusual poem about a very common topic. Great visual with the bag dripping as you run away..........what an interesting take on ''stealing'' somebody's heart! Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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