Sunday, March 20, 2011

Drip, Drip... Comments

Rating: 2.8

Drip, drip...
The steady sound of rain
Sliding down the window pane
Drip, drip...
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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski
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Dawn Lambert 02 January 2013

wow'.....I'm speechless beautiful

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I think you separated the stanzas really well, and I like how you can tell it was written in the moment, just is all the emotion poured forth in the only way you could relate it.

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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Springfield, MA
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