Sunday, December 29, 2013

Drinking Red Wine On The Beach This Night Comments

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I swill from the bottle of wine and
with quiet eyes watch the waves soften
before me. It is that
serene hour, after the stars have
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Tony Walton
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Bri Edwards 20 January 2018

favorite lines so far: red burn sun bows out to the moon sitting high with a conspiratorial chaulky smile. It lends me it's soft glow onto..................but use its :) got to go to supper soon! did you mean this? .............foamy gentle thrusts into this beach...ok, i get it now, i think. lay back onto the sand .........i think lie back. ..........unfortunately an easy mistake to make. bri ;) i liked the poem.

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