Monday, September 29, 2008

Drinking 'N The Moons Beams Comments

Rating: 3.3

DRINKING 'N THE MOON BEAMS

With a bottle of wine I sit by the flowing willow tree
Wer’re drinking alone the moon and I
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JAMES ROBERTS
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Fay Slimm 01 October 2008

I love the imagery you have used here Jim - a sad verse but showing not everything goes when relationships end, we have more than moonbeams if we look in the right place. A good piece in the reading too. 10 from me.

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Lynda Robson 29 September 2008

Nice poem Jim, flows like the wine, although its sad to drink alone, 10 Lynda xx

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David Threadgold 29 September 2008

Hi James. A really well put together piece that flows very well. and projecting a sad drinking session. well done Regards Dave T**10** a great read cheers to you and the shadow.

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Marilyn Lott 29 September 2008

Aww, such a sad poem, drinking alone with the moon beams. Beautiful but sad. A '10! ' James. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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