Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Drinking By The Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

It seems so natural
with the moon bobbing on top
of the water
like a drunken rowboat,
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W.I. Stoneberger
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Wonderful poetry with drinking words woven into the theme brilliantly. A pleasure to read from top to bottom. (hic) 10 Karin Anderson

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Fiona Davidson 02 June 2009

Glorious write William...imagery is so vivid....Fi 10+++

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Martin Swords 02 June 2009

Lovely poem from a poet who's obviously been there. Haven't we all, most of us. Thanks, martin

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