Friday, November 8, 2013

Drinking - A Sad Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

He's started drinking.
I can tell by the way his world is shrinking
smaller and smaller,
ever inwards on itself.
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Susy Evelyne
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Drinking has such changes in human life and it is created very nicely by the poet. good.

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Bill Cantrell 28 March 2014

Only one who has been exposed to such could ever pen so correctly pen these emotions of both the drunk and that of the one putting up with him...and if you should dare to draw near, he'll growl like an angry bear. Great poem my friend.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 January 2014

Ah i hav heard of d drunkard's selfdestruction n misery too many times. U narrate his story in superb hardhitting metaphor. A great poetic craft telin of his sunken sinkin drinkin life. Great to read u again susy! New yr greetings.

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John Brown 26 November 2013

Sad poem indeed. I hope it's purely fictional.

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Susy Evelyne

Susy Evelyne

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