Pick up the booze,
Pour it down the sink.
Please will you just stop?
Have your one last drink.
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To give a rating on this poem I'm telling you that every moment I fully experienced a 10/10 And your fathers' not gone No, it's just time does post-pone But I guarantee, he will come again God bless Julius Luke I. Victorio
Beautiful. you truely are amazing. I know a couple of my people that can relate to that.
thats terrible i know soo mnay people who do this: for example my oldest brother an he has a wonderful girlfriend an a year old daughter [my neice] an we moved cross states so jenny [his girlriend] an my neice katey have noone to be there for them cus my brother is doing drugs an popping pills its been going on before they started dating almost 3 years ago an its terrible to watch him ruin his life an theirs: Hope the best, but sometimes parents dont see their mistakes until they hit ROck BOttom
Mikayal: I hope your father soon realizes what he is missing out on by not being there to share your life. Keeping on writing and remember we here at Poemhunter are available to give you any advise we can. I was very down when I was on board the USS Lenawee during the Korean War and felt the whole world had forgotten me so I just kept on writing. Now I have a book titled 'Poems from the Heart' and you can too. Just keep on writing.Your Poem Pal Lynn B Glover
Actually, it is so sad but so so sweet and it's so evident that you wrote it from the core! ! Well done...10++++ Merna
wow so much emotion in this poem outstaying work and a good flow.. to it to it's the best one i read today keep the good work..10...
Bless Mikayla - I hope your father get to read this to realise what a wounderful caring daughter he has - take care 10++++++
i know it hurts my dad was the same hang in there mikayla