Shed no tears,
upon my dying bed;
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I like this Senryu for its carefree expression of mourning or death. To drink brandy to reduce the intensity of a heavy pain........Kostas, you deserve a full vote....10
Shed no tears but drink brandy! Unique idea Kostas! ...... :)
A well-written senryu! A good sedative for a wound, and time will do the complete healing.
Time and brandy can comfort those who are in pain. Thank you Mihaela!
Yes, brandy could take away the pain temporarily. But the pain still persists if the effect of the brandy ceases. Excellent succinct write.10
True. Pain is always there. So is brandy! Thank you RM!