Monday, October 22, 2018

Drink Some Brandy-Πιες Λίγο Μπράντυ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shed no tears,

upon my dying bed;
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Kostas Lagos
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 October 2018

Yes, brandy could take away the pain temporarily. But the pain still persists if the effect of the brandy ceases. Excellent succinct write.10

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Kostas Lagos 25 October 2018

True. Pain is always there. So is brandy! Thank you RM!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 October 2018

Life and death! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Kostas Lagos 25 October 2018

Thank you for your comment Edward.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 October 2018

I like this Senryu for its carefree expression of mourning or death. To drink brandy to reduce the intensity of a heavy pain........Kostas, you deserve a full vote....10

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Kostas Lagos 24 October 2018

Thank you Geeta! Thanks a lot!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 October 2018

Shed no tears but drink brandy! Unique idea Kostas! ...... :)

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Mihaela Pirjol 22 October 2018

A well-written senryu! A good sedative for a wound, and time will do the complete healing.

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Kostas Lagos 22 October 2018

Time and brandy can comfort those who are in pain. Thank you Mihaela!

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