Friday, April 10, 2009

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Dipsomaniac - his elbow
Resting on the bar: that man was
In the pub throughout his life. He
Never really stopped to think,
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Mark R Slaughter
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

quite a fine drink u have here.. cheers 2 u for making an exquisite poem..outstanding

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Alison Cassidy 18 April 2009

It's rare to hear the word dipsomaniac - so much more poetic than alcoholic or drunk - to describe those sad souls for whom 'one drink' is not an option. Humor delivered poetically and with a serious message. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sid John Gardner. 15 April 2009

He didn't have the wherewithall his heart to warm a cockle; Seeing life through the bottom of a bottle.A subject close to a real ale drinkers heart.But drink to remember, never to forget. Sid

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Fiona Davidson 10 April 2009

Great acrostic Mark...10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 10 April 2009

Dipsomanic - flowery word for a bar fly.

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Mark R Slaughter

Mark R Slaughter

Norwich UK
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