Driftwood Comments

Great poem, love the imagery you've created.

See me? I am your floaties: ^)

The third and fourth stanzas are the best to me, and I really liked this line: Could we stay there a while? Im not asking forever. This poem seems to stem from a very tender yet honest place. Your emotions are excellently expressed with this metaphor. The false confidence portrayed in the third stanza and then the feeling of being stuck in one spot in the fourth are very relatable.