Thursday, August 9, 2012

Driftwood Comments

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Drift wood

Is this just 'fun' for you?
Coasting on the ride.
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Stevie Taite
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Christopher Tye 31 October 2016

Great poem, love the imagery you've created.

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Ruby Honeytip 14 February 2013

See me? I am your floaties: ^)

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Alla Simone 17 October 2012

The third and fourth stanzas are the best to me, and I really liked this line: Could we stay there a while? Im not asking forever. This poem seems to stem from a very tender yet honest place. Your emotions are excellently expressed with this metaphor. The false confidence portrayed in the third stanza and then the feeling of being stuck in one spot in the fourth are very relatable.

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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