The fledgling bush
grew into a tree
not without
birth pains
...
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beautiful ink.'the world watched for its downfall from hurricane of woes' is very nice.
driftwood floats to nowhere, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
Your poems have powerful endings that stay with the reader. Excelent poem.
i dont know if it was your intended effect but it made me a bit sad...like i am standing tall and strong now but for what? to be a forgotten driftwood. great poem though: ]
I like very much - took me to a place of peaceful seasons in my mind.
gREAT WRITE. tHANKS FOR SHARING