Sunday, May 10, 2009

Drifting Through Time.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Couples fight and argue
Hurt one another
Make each other cry
I feel lucky
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Original Unknown Girl 04 June 2009

Sometimes our soul needs the nothingness, the emptiness, in order to set out the correct path or feeling to reflect onto others. There is nothing wrong with feeling nothing, except of course that I advocate feeling something as opposed to feeling nothing. Pain has its place and I've been there and fed from it. It can have its purpose but I sense from this piece that you've done with pain (really) and would much rather have some intensity to make your soul soar. Am I right? HG: -) xx

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Shweta Advani 10 May 2009

Hey buddy..keep flowing....wherever life takes u...it's a beautiful journey....keep movin..gud write: -)

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Johnson Nekoda 10 May 2009

I like the concept of ur poem

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