Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Drifting Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fast moving river
Cold and deep 
To immerse myself I deliver
From the jetty, leap!
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Robert Green
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Walterrean Salley 18 November 2012

Thoughts recounting how a favorable day turned into a nightmare. What an ordeal. Glad you made it. Watch those currents.

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Smoky Hoss 12 September 2012

This seems to have a metaphoric flow to it: a picture in words of lifes calm turned to struggle. A superb symbol of living in this tumultuous world. Great poem.

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Valerie Dohren 08 August 2012

A sink or swim write I guess - choose to swim. Great write.

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