Saturday, February 16, 2008

Drifting Love Comments

Rating: 4.7

Two lovers once together
One day drift apart
To later in the future
Sail back into each other's hearts
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Ashley Hart
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Haytem A.f 02 October 2008

Love the last 2 lines, good job in general, all the best

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Bobbie Jo ..... 15 May 2008

nice poem. short and sweet. lol

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Cantrell Dicky 23 April 2008

Very sweet and tender, young love is so fresh A nice poem

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Grant Nealy 30 March 2008

A nice little poem, good work

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 23 February 2008

so beautiful..thanks for sharing

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Elaine Name 16 February 2008

Completely LOVELY! i give it a 10....short, and lovely..

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Dislocated Heart 16 February 2008

wow.. great job. good luck to you both. well written poem. -Justin

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