Thursday, August 22, 2013

Drifting Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

' For the beginning is assuredly
the end -since we know nothing, pure
and simple, beyond
our own complexities. ' - William Carlos Williams
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Smoky Hoss
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Hans Vr 01 September 2013

A good poem elaborating on some reality issues. Sometimes I feel like reality is closing in and 'd like just drifting away from it Yet on other times, I manage to count the blessings, to see so much beauty, that I truly love the reality so much. The last stanza brings us with our feet back on the ground Finally all of us will drift away into another reality (?) ...

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Dee Corpolongo 30 August 2013

Wow....did not expect that ending! Great poem as I love just drifting away... and you've got so much to say! ! ! Loved it.

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Claudia Krizay 23 August 2013

Very very good, Smoky! So much insight- I love it.

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Heather Wilkins 23 August 2013

drifting away in many different ways. a good write.

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Valerie Dohren 22 August 2013

Well I'd certainly like to go drifting away many times over Smoky, but think I'll give the last stanza a rain check! Great poem, well written.

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Neela Nath Das 22 August 2013

A wonderful poem.Loved very much.

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